Author: | Nola | Published: | over 6 years ago |
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Tags: | short stories, Futurevision, science fiction | Category: | Blog tour |
It’s Gree Jarko. Senior tech. I don’t have long. I’m in the bowels of the ComCheck building. They’ll stop me when they work out what I’m doing. But I can’t ignore what I’ve found. It changed me. It could change you. I hope you see this. I’ll keep typing as if you will.
This is the opening paragraph from my short story One Hundred Words that appears in the anthology Futurevision recently published by 1231 Publishing. Futurevision was the brainchild of author, editor and publisher Delia Strange. She called for submissions of fictional tales set in the future, and the result was an eclectic collection of twenty stories by twenty Australian authors. Some stories fit purely in the realms of science fiction, with imaginative technological advances and interplanetary travel. Other stories speculate on the near future. There may be the odd pandemic, environmental disaster or military takeover; but there’s also humour and the hope of better things to come.
For my story, I imagined a world in which all communications were reduced to their bare bones. My heroine spends her workdays reducing emails and articles to the one hundred words ordained by the Waste Tribunal. She’s never questioned this way of life until she discovers a box of letters her grandfather had written to her grandmother fifty years earlier while he was serving overseas. She’s captivated by the beautiful language and realises how much she’s missed by submitting to the Waste Tribunal’s edicts. What does she do about it? Well, you’ll just have to read my story to find out.
One Hundred Words had a long gestation period. It started as an assignment for my Graduate Diploma in Creative Writing at Tabor Adelaide back in 2010. I’d been thinking about how communication had changed since I was at school. I’d always loved writing and receiving letters, but snail mail was on the decline. Emails, texts, tweets, and social media had revolutionised communication, but I couldn’t help feeling nostalgic for the old days when I’d open my actual, rather than virtual, mailbox to find letters from penpals in India, Germany, and Sweden.
The story was revised several times, taking into account valuable feedback from my lecturer, husband and critique partners. I entered it in a couple of competitions, without success, but kept it on the backburner. Fast forward to early 2017 when I heard about the Futurevision anthology only a few weeks before the closing date. My story fit the theme, but the publisher had mentioned she wouldn’t be accepting any more military stories because she already had a few of those. In my original version, the heroine’s grandfather had been a soldier in Afghanistan and wrote about those experiences in his letters. Was that too military? I didn’t want to take any chances, so I rewrote his character as a peace keeper in the Middle East. I also sought feedback from another friend and incorporated her suggestions. The story was accepted and I was thrilled to find that it would be the opening piece in the collection. Delia Strange also did a fantastic job with editing, formatting and cover design for the volume.
In the seven years my story was percolating, we’ve come closer to the world I imagined. I recently spoke to a teenage girl who’d never been inside a post office and a nine-year-old girl who didn’t know what a postage stamp was. I wouldn’t want to go back to the time before email and social media, but I can’t help thinking we’ve lost something along the way. Hopefully, my story will provide food for thought, as do the other stories in the anthology.
Paperback copies of Futurevision can be purchased from Amazon or 1231 Publishing for just $10 AUD (plus postage). Electronic copies will be available soon. If you’d like to find out more about the stories, scroll down the Futurevision page at 1231 Publishing and click on the arrows to read extracts from all contributions.
Friend and fantasy author, Jeanette O’Hagan, will be blogging about her story Rendezvous at Alexgaia next Wednesday 4 October. Why not pop over to her website in the meantime and find out why she writes by the light of two moons.
What do you think our world will be like in the future? I’d love to hear your thoughts.
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Excellent blog, Nola. It is a unique volume. The stories in it are all on point. Delia has done a great job with everything toward its production. I did enjoy your story, images of '1984' came to mind. Our media does reduce information, if not to one hundred words, certainly to the binaries of either one or the other, and therefore our thinking. All the stories had some great insights into what might be ahead.
Thanks Raelene. I really liked yours too. I've read about 15 of the stories so far, and I'm really enjoying the book as a whole. It's fascinating to see what each person came up with. Some similar themes, but also a lot of creativity. Though I'm hoping some of those scenarios don't come to pass. Looking forward to your blog on it in a couple of weeks' time. Thanks for commenting :)
I should have picked up a copy of Futurevision on the weekend, although they were going like hot cakes!
Thanks Lynne. I heard you all did really well. It must have felt good to be in a whole room of people at Comic Con who were into sci-fi and fantasy. And we might have a few copies tucked away in our bags at the Omega conference :)
They were indeed :) I've still got some left, if you want one Lynne :)
Good blog thanks Nola. I am enjoying dipping into the anthology and have read all three by CWD and enjoyed them I do identify with your sentiments expressed in the story and in your post above. I do think we've lost something in the process of 'getting faster and smarter', a lot, but then again imagine writing a novel without a computer!
Glad you enjoyed our stories, Jeanette. I wrote first novel by hand - at first on any bit of paper I could get my hands on, including the back of envelopes, and the notepads donated by pharmaceutical companies (in between patients). Eventually I wrote it all out longhand and a kind friend typed it into the computer for me. I'm thankful for word processors these days - but glad we are not restricted to 100 words :)
Though Jenny, I've heard of novels being serialised as tweets of 140 characters. Not sure how many fantasy epics would be among them though :)
Thanks for that, Jeanette. I'm glad you're enjoying it. And there certainly are pros and cons of our faster world. Back in my Uni days, I typed all of my assignments on an old typewriter. When I started my first full-time job in 1989, we didn't have email or personal computers. Hard to believe. I love the convenience we have now, but I do miss the slower pace of life and letters in the regular mail. Appreciate your comments.
Loved your story in Futurevision, Nola - and Raelene's too. I've finished the anthology and thoroughly enjoyed it. It's a great selection with most of the stories keeping me turning the pages, anxious to find out what happens in the end.
Thanks Jenny. Glad you liked it. I really enjoyed yours and Raelene's too. I'm three-quarters of the way through and have loved the interesting mix of ideas. Will be interesting to hear the background to your story next week.
Thanks Adele. And thanks too for the feedback you gave me. That really helped me to hone it into a better story. Thanks for commenting.
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