That's great Jenny. Thanks for that. Much better than my version. And I can feel Angelina's pain. I'm gluten-free, but am also allergic to oranges, and orange and almond cake is the most common GF. Fortunately Toowoomba has lots of great cafes that carry a better range. Thanks for giving a great example of how to use action and description. Certainly makes it a lot better. Thanks too for responding, replying, commenting ...
I'm allergic to wheat and bananas (and ginger) - so it can be quite a challenge finding something to eat at times. I do like Orange and Almond but as you say it's often the only option and one can definitely have too much of a good thing.
I'm glad you liked my example. I can already see things I could improve lol but it was fun to write :)
Wow, you're the second person I know who can't eat bananas. Does make it difficult. There are some great cafes in Toowoomba that have a good range of GF. You'll have to come up and visit again. And thanks again for such a good example. I need to practise those too.