Author: | Nola | Published: | over 9 years ago |
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Tags: | backstory, information dump | Category: | Writing tips |
In George Orwell’s dystopian novel Nineteen Eighty-Four, citizens could be eliminated for indulging in thought crimes. However, a more heinous crime was committed by Orwell himself: the dreaded information dump. Don’t get me wrong; Nineteen Eighty-Four is a classic for good reasons. However, I would award a Snore Factor of 110 to the twenty or so pages where the protagonist Winston reads from a book entitled The Theory and Practice of Oligarchical Collectivism. I’m sorry George, but that part of the novel reads like a political essay. Oh wait … it is a political essay. In any case, it’s dull.
This raises a dilemma faced by many novelists. How do you relay information to readers without boring them to tears or taking them out of the story?
Here are some solutions.
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Another good post Nola, thank you. I was thinking of the Hitch Hikers Guide to the Galaxy by Douglas Adams - the inserts from the Guide are 'info dumps' but hilarious and entertaining.
Thanks Jenny. That's a good one. If they can be entertaining, they don't seem like info dumps. If only George Orwell had injected some humour into The Theory and Practice of Oligarchical Collectivism. Mmm ... probably not the right tone :)
Just on a bit of a tangent, Air New Zealand go to a lot of trouble to make their inflight safety videos entertaining. They did one whole one based on Lord of the Rings and you wanted to pay attention. Just shows you can get information across in an interesting way. Thanks for the idea.
Excellent post again, Nola. As Jeanette said, there are good info dumps, but they are fairly rare. Relating this to a Christian fiction writer, this is where they relate a chunk of information from a book, or have the character sitting in church listening to a sermon--and relate the sermon. One of our upcoming authors did both things in her manuscript, although not in a big way. Both bits got the cut.
And speaking of great inflight safety videos, Virgin Australia's international safety video is really cute. Even has a cartoon appearance by Sir Richard Branson (sigh ... my hero.). ;-)
Anyway, this is another blog post to share.
Thanks Deb. Yes, I can probably think of some books like that as well. So much better if the faith elements are woven into the story rather than conveyed in dumps. Maybe we can put our characters on a plane and share the info during the inflight video. I just had a quick look at the Virgin clip on YouTube. That's a good one.
In all seriousness, we could probably learn a lot from the airlines. They've obviously realised that people tend to switch off if the info is boring, so they've gone to some effort to make it engaging. That's what all writers should be doing. Now the pressure's on for me to practise what I preach :)
Thanks for the share too Deb. Really appreciate that.
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