I found this post extremely helpful, Nola. I'd never really given the concept of head-hopping much thought till now, and while it's sometimes intuitive for me, I'm sure there are many other times when I slip-up. The manner in which you've explained the concept will help me greatly when I edit my manuscripts! Thank you.
Glad you found it helpful, Melinda. I find it's something I need to remind myself of. I'm pretty good at not overtly jumping across to someone else's head (most of the time), but it's easy to let those little slips in. Have found numerous in my work-in-progress. Looking forward to reading your stellar manuscript :) Thanks for commenting.