Good and useful post, thanks Nola. I'll try hard to get it right next novel. I appreciated your opening.
Thanks for that Jeanette. It does take a while to get a handle on it, especially regarding the more subtle head hops. After writing that post, I went to edit a section of my novel manuscript and found a couple of slips I hadn't noticed before. Hopefully the more times I hear it, the more it will sink in. Thanks for commenting.